Rate my poem 1-10 and explain why?

I'll give a 7 charitably. It was telling and gruesome. I had two family members die in tower # 1 that day, which is I guess a reason I'm answering. There areas of it that need to be edited, such as three words running together and perhaps that's true in other segments. The rhyme scheme can be cleaned up and the stanza structure could be more consistent.